Mystery Tracks Shh

I watch as he takes notes, wondering if he really is getting this stuff. The word stuff is too informal. (I feel like I am my english teacher!) I believe ...

I liked the wording, but i believe it is too short to really understand the character's emotions.

This was a great piece. I liked it. I could not pick out any errors! good work

Well, it was not great but it was good. I don't really know how to describe it since I am very bad at reviews...

I liked it, but I didn't really understand it really. It was kind of confusing... Well, it just might be me. XD

This is really good! I loved it! I was sad and very...emotional. At the beginning, I didn't know you were talking about the father. But I figured it out later ...

I liked this. I thought it had a good rhythem. I also liked how you thought of what you didn't want to see or hear in the first stanza. I ...

I agree with Silly Sydtix that it sounded kind of off. Even though it was, I thought it was pretty good. I liked it. I usually don't read poems because ...

I liked it, but I was kind of confused about it the same time. Other than that, even though I didn't get it, I really liked how it sounded when ...

First of all, very nice descrpitions. The thing I don't anderstand is, what is Kay exactly? A mini unicorn? What's that? it kind of explains it, but actually describe it ...

Wow! That is very good! nice job!

Banned because I cannot think of a good enough reason do ban you!

9/10 For some reason I like your avatar!

This will be in the Jingle bells tune. --------------------------------------------- VERSE ONE Running towards a sale, Trying to get there first, But then you fall and fail, You're sure your shoes ...

I really like how you write! It's lovely!